After we all has looked over the script we decided that we needed to shorten it as it was to long. To re-write this script we all went aay and thought about how we could improve it. We decided that we needed to take parts out that weren't necessary as they weren't benefiting the title sequence in anyway. Furthermore we also felt that we need o cut down the dialogue for our female character. This was to wordy and was too long to be able to keep the audience attention. In addition to the above our script has had the change due to a change in our storyboard which has taken an impact on the opening and the middle of our title sequence.
The Crown Jewels Draft 2
From us all thinking about the script and deciding to re-write some of the main parts has helped us with the development of our title sequence and also the has helped with oue understanding of how a title sequence should be. From looking at this script and then the storyboard, I can now visualise the opening of our title sequence. From re storyboarding it definatley helped when it came to editing the script as we could take a lot of the script out that wasn't needed anymore.
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