In Wednesdays lessons we showed our teacher this version of our opening. When watching it, it definitely does flow a lot better than what our last cut did.
Here is the feedback we got:
- Flows a lot better
- An extremely pleased with it overall
- Lengthen the title' The Game' for another second so that it can be read.
- Make the alarm in the opening scene come in a little quicker before the actors start running onto the screen as here it started just a little bit before.
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